Mormon 4:20–21 Textual Variants

Royal Skousen
and there they did stand against the Lamanites with exceeding boldness insomuch that the Lamanites did not beat them until they had come again the second time and when they had come [ 1ABCDEFGIJLMNOPQRST|again HK] the second time the Nephites were driven and slaughtered with an exceeding great slaughter

The 1874 RLDS edition added the again here, probably accidentally. The probable source for the error was the again that is found in the virtually identical clause that ends the previous verse (“until they had come again the second time”). Elsewhere in the text, again usually occurs in front of the phrase “the nth time” (there are 13 more examples). However, in three cases the again is not there (identified below in each instance with an arrow):

Note the variation in usage in the first and third of these three passages, just as in Mormon 4:20–21, although in 3 Nephi 11:6 the again is not really possible before the second instance of “the third time” since the crowd understood the voice only after they had heard it three times. In any event, the original text in Mormon 4:20–21 without the again for the repeated instance of “the second time” is fully possible (just like in Ether 14:29).

Summary: Accept the use of “the second time” in Mormon 4:21 without the again since variation with and without again is possible for the phrase “the nth time”, although usually the text has the again.

Analysis of Textual Variants of the Book of Mormon, Part. 6

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